这2句话有语病吗?有没有更好的说法?

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这2句话有语病吗?有没有更好的说法?
We were glad when the plane landed on the new airport of Bangkok in the afternoon.
Got down the plane ,I couldn’t almost endure the weather which is too hot.
英语不好,不敢确定哎!

We were glad to see the plane landed on the new airport of Bangkok in the afternoon.
Got down the plane ,I almost couldn’t endure the hot weather.