求问这句英语有无语法错误:

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求问这句英语有无语法错误:
We can also find that customers are relatively satisfied with our parking and book service,while as for the latter,split is slight-there are only 50 positive responses more than the negative.

negative‘s.请问破折号后面这样加句子对么?可以,但是大家一般不用破折号,所以还不如用状语从句because/since/for 。。。不管怎么说吧,虽然语法没问题,但老觉得你这整句话别扭。喔喔 谢谢~