请问我写的这句话有无错误,尤其是语法错误

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请问我写的这句话有无错误,尤其是语法错误
Although Vietnam perfume is not internationally recognized image as French perfume,it shares the same temping fragrance and attractive package with French perfume and it is suitable to used as a kind of daily necessities for Yong women since the price of it is more reasonable

Although Vietnam perfume is not internationally recognized image as French perfume, it shares the same temping (是tempting) fragrance and attractive package with French perfume and it is suitable to used (要改为use) as a kind of daily necessities for Yong (young) women (since 要改为 for) the price of it is more reasonable

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