看一下这段英语有语法错误吗

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看一下这段英语有语法错误吗
taking exercise could makes yourself feel tried ,and when they feel tried ,to relax or to go to bed is all they want to do .so if they don't have enough energy ,they mightn't take exercise easily

could makes 应该是make
,to relax or to go to bed这里or后面的to去掉,避免重复哦 谢谢 就这样吗 还有什么吗?应该没了吧。。。。