请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文（语法、用词)

请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文（语法、用词)
1,中国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流,由此出现“哑巴英语”现象
2,造成“哑巴英语”原因
3,提供一些可行的解决方法
" Mute English"among Chinese students
A phenomonon of "Mute English"appears among chinese students because they can't use English to talk with their classmates ,friends and foreigners.
There are two reasons for this situation.First ,most of Chinese students studys English for their examination ,they pay more attention to written test and neglect of spoken language .It is a fail to Chinese education .Second ,many Chinese students are so shy and unconfident in English class ,they always listening carefully ,but not put up their hands to answer teacher's questions .
If the Chinese students solve this problem ,as I see it ,they must cover the following points:first ,don't study hard for examiation ,but the konwledge; second,they should pay attention to spoken lanuage ;last,if they meet the foreigner in supermarket or restaurant ,they should talk with the poreign people boldly.
In a word,learning English or another foreign lanuage is a interesting ,not a burden,we shouldn't study only for examination.
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