初一60词英语作文,求大神帮忙写
初一60词英语作文,求大神帮忙写
假如你是Jenny.今天是星期天,你的家人没有外出安排.请你写一下此时此刻你的家人都在做什么.
要求：
重点使用现在进行时.
60词左右.
另外,希望指出你写的作文的精彩之处,还有所用到的句型,谢谢!
It is Sunday again!I am very happy because my family and I could go to the mall for shopping.Since I haven't shopped for a long time I was extremely anticipating for today,Firstly,we are going to the shoes section; afterwards,I am going to buy some new clothe because my old ones won't fit me quite well; then,my mom will bring us to the grocery store inside the mall to buy some fruits.Although I don't like fruits,they are good for my health.Lastly,my favorite part comes; we are going to have dinner in my favorite western restaurant.I guess my Sunday is really wonderful
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句型 future tense我们作文需要分三段，可以再改一下下吗？改完就采纳哦~It is Sunday again! I am very happy because my family and I could go to the mall for shopping. Since I haven't shopped for a long time I was extremely anticipating for today.
Firstly, we are going to the shoes section; afterwards, I am going to buy some new clothe because my old ones won't fit me quite well; then, my mom will bring us to the grocery store inside the mall to buy some fruits. Although I don't like fruits, they are good for my health. Lastly, my favorite part comes; we are going to have dinner in my favorite western restaurant.
I guess my Sunday is really wonderful