帮忙看看这英文语法有没有错
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帮忙看看这英文语法有没有错
For emperor must protect the powerful enemy,was determined that renovates the Great Wall.
还有一句：At that time was known as Shanhai Pass which the first under heaven closed,actually already in disrepair after many years,
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我为你修改吧.谈多无意义.
The Emperor,who wanted to protect his country from the powerful enemy,was determined to repair and restore the Great Wall.
皇帝为了想要从强大的敌人中保卫他自己的国家,所以决定修复和恢复长城.
[建筑物只能用restore 和repair,不能用renovate]
At that time it was known as ShanHai Pass,which the first of the Heavenly close,was already in disrepaired/dilapidated condition after so many years.
当时被称为ShanHai关经过无数岁月早已经处于破旧不堪的状况了.