想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍考研复试用的~本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的因为有的部分是模板,所以我只把自己觉得别扭的地方点列下来.1.I have already passed CET-6 in July 2010.In the past half year I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination by rent a room which near an university.Actually this is my second time to take part in the exam for the dream of Suzhou University.2.Life is precious.It is necessary to seize any chance for self-development,especially when you r

想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍
考研复试用的~
本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的
因为有的部分是模板,所以我只把自己觉得别扭的地方点列下来.
1.I have already passed CET-6 in July 2010.In the past half year I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination by rent a room which near an university.Actually this is my second time to take part in the exam for the dream of Suzhou University.
2.Life is precious.It is necessary to seize any chance for self-development,especially when you realize what is your really like.
3.as an old saying goes,actions speak louder than words.Right here,I only want to say I am open-minded and very fond of Psychology.
4.I like reading books,especially those about literature and geography.Of course,besides psychology.
In addition,during my college years,I had been three consecutive years of table tennis champion of our college.The process of competition make me have a better mentality when I face difficultes and pressure,moreover,the process of training make me more persevering when I determined to do something.
5.I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance
Applied Psychology.
还可以多加分的!