I'll be a man that the most love you in this world.这句话有语病吗?

问题描述:

I'll be a man that the most love you in this world.
这句话有语病吗?

I'll be the man that loves you the most in this world.

a man 变成the man,the most love you 变成 love you best
如下
I'll be the man who love you best in the world

有错.正确说法是:I'll be a man that love you the most in this world.