这个英文句子我写的对吗?

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这个英文句子我写的对吗?
中文意思:我已经把旅游签证的护照给了他的父亲
英文我写的是:I already put the a tourism - Visa to the passport give to his father
请问我写的对吗?

不对哦
I have already given the passport with a valid (有效的) tourist visa to his father.