帮忙看看这个英语句子有没有错误

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帮忙看看这个英语句子有没有错误
Only when you gain people's respect resulting from your hard-working can you regard yourself a successful one.

Only when you gain people's respect from your hard-working can you regard yourself as a successful one.
建议去掉resulting奇怪,别扭,from就代表同一个意思了.
as后面再加个a