汉译英:关于购买这台机器我们正在与客户洽谈.

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汉译英:关于购买这台机器我们正在与客户洽谈.
这样说对吗?WE are bargaining with our customer about this product.

关于购买这台机器我们正在与客户洽谈.
We are negotiating with our client on purchasing this machine.