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评价英语作文The future trend of Chinese culture
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The future trend of Chinese culture
In the information age, no country and individual can resist the influence of globalization, and culture, a mirror that reflects the history and development of a nation, is also certain to be deeply affected by the trend of globalization. In the process of cross-cultural communication, Chinese culture is experiencing some changes as well.
Some people argue that Chinese culture, as the essence of world's cultural heritage, shouldn't be much influenced. However, in my view, it is necessary, to some extent, to make some changes based on the following reasons: In the first place, while keeping its traditional style, Chinese culture has to draw on the strong points of the cultures of other nations in order to be more world-oriented.In the second place, advanced elements in today's infomation age ought to be absorbed into Chinese culture as well so that both the past precious cultural heritage and the latest developments in modern society can be presented to the outside world.
To sum up, the future trend of Chinese culture is towards the international direction. Only by welcoming all human excellent civilizations across the world can Chinese culture achieve greater progress and have a brighter prospect.

天哪,题目够大,可是您有没有真的考察过“culture”的准确定义,有没有研究过它与“history”以及“development of a nation”之间的关系.“culture”只在当今经历一些变化吗?“culture”之变化是人说了算的吗?也许你想讨论的是中国传统观念,尤其是不能适应全球一体化趋势的旧观念,在高度信息化的当今世界应该何去何从的问题.
你的英文尚可,但是请仔细思考你要讨论的问题和你的论点.英语作文和任何语言的作文一样,要讲立意和逻辑的.文化这题目,实在太大啊,要当心.