麻烦大家帮我修改文章的语病
麻烦大家帮我修改文章的语病
* break which was a american drama that showed over today.it's such an exciting love stroy and adventur story that i have never loved americn drama like this.micheal scofield was a impressive name in everyone's memory,even the ending of * break he was died unfortunately.when i watched over the last action,i enter the BBS about * break,i want to share and listen the feeling that from everyone's heart.we supposed micheal scofield was a seed to planted in our heart four years ago,and now it has grown a huge tree which could't be instead.
* break had been accompanying with us for many years,do you remember that we used to wait for a week and just to see the forty minutes show,it's funny right,lol.
we should go to the correct way and do our business whatever * break couldn't back again,but we should remember all of the face that appears in it.MICHEAL SCOFIELD ,LINCON BURROWS,SARA,MAHONE,SUCRE,LJ,KELLERMAN,BRAD BELLICK,JOHN ABRUZZI ...
1 a american drama -an
2 stroy-story
3 adventur-adventure
4 have never loved americn drama like this是想表达从来没有像这样喜欢一部美剧是吗?这样表达不妥应该成The most +形容词 I have ever seen 这样更符合英语习惯,而不chinglish.
5 a impressive name -an 楼主冠词要留意,元音音节前+an
6 even-although这里你是想说尽管的意思吧
7 enter-entered 过去式
8 want-wanted
9 listen- listen to 听什么是listen to ,比如listen to music
10 michael scofield-人名首字母大写
11 a seed to planted-a seed which was planted
12 instead-instead of
13 wait for a week and just to see- wait for a week just to see就是去掉and
14 whatever * break couldn't back -even though * break couldn't be back
15 face-faces
错误还真不少,继续努力吧,PS本人也喜欢* Break