一篇英语短文,找语病并修改
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一篇英语短文,找语病并修改
In my opinion,Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth to do it,and not work very hard.But if I love this job,even the job can't well paid,I can still enjoy the job and get more fun from this job.Without it ,the work will be too hard to get efficiency.
答
真的是一篇相当中式的文章.你说他错了吧,他语法又没错.但是这个说起来真的是太纠结了,错误不多,1.i will feel no warmth to do it不恰当,可改为no passion;
2.even the job can't well paid应改为even i can't be paid不是工作付钱,而是我被支付薪水
3.可改可不改,without it最好改成without that