帮我修改篇英语自我介绍内容Good afternoon,my dear taechers and schoolmates.My name is .I come from .You can see I was little fat.Because i am very like cooking and eating.I like eat delicous foods ,suah as pasta,pizza and so on.But i also like sports.So when i knew the Olympic Games will hold in Beijing.I was very exciting.I want to be a volunteer in 2008 to help the games.This is my little gream.I hope it will be true.Thank you!帮我修改一下看有没有什么错误．多谢了!

Good afternoon, my dear teachers and shoolmates. My name is xx. I come from xx. You can see that I am a little big. Because I like cooking and eating very much. I like to eat delicious foods such as pasta,pizza and so on. I also like sports. When I know that the Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, I was very exciting. I want to be a volunteer in 2008 to help the people for the games. This is my little dream. I hope it will come true. Thank you!

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Good afternoon, dear teachers and schoolmates. My name is .I come from .You can see I was little fat because I like cooking and eating very much. I like delicious foods, such as pasta, pizza and so on. But I also like sports. So when I knew the Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008, I was very excited. I want to be a volunteer in 2008 to help the games. This is my little dream. I hope it will come true. Thank you!

YOU CAN SEE I AM A BIT FAT
BECAUSE I LOVE COOKING AND EATING
I LIKE NICE FOOD, SUCH AS PASTA, PIZZA,再想一个,AND SO ON 要三个以上用的.
BUT I LIKE SPORTS AS WELL.
I WANNA BE A VOLUNTEER IN 2008.
THIS IS ONE OF MY DREAMS
I HOPE IT WILL COME TRUE