英语高手帮我分析一下下面两个英语句子有没有错误1.most middle schools,giving priorities to studying and high grades,have negleted the nurture of students sound personality and ablity of conmmunication(我认为have 用having,students用students' )2.parents should cultivate their children sense of independence from their childhood (children是不是该用children‘s)

英语高手帮我分析一下下面两个英语句子有没有错误
1.most middle schools,giving priorities to studying and high grades,have negleted the nurture of students sound personality and ablity of conmmunication(我认为have 用having,students用students' )
2.parents should cultivate their children sense of independence from their childhood (children是不是该用children‘s)