英语翻译我翻译的“我始终带着你爱的微笑,一路上寻找我遗失的美好”:Always with the smile you like on my face,I'm looking for the beauty I have lost 请问哪里不合适,应该怎样修改

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英语翻译
我翻译的“我始终带着你爱的微笑,一路上寻找我遗失的美好”:
Always with the smile you like on my face,I'm looking for the beauty I have lost 请问哪里不合适,应该怎样修改

The smile that you loved always with me,I keep looking for my vanished wonderful time on my way.