这句英语句子,能否做如下修改?原句:The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year. 改法:把逗号后面从句改成doubling that of the increase in the previous year.这样改,有没有问题,若有,是什么问题?

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这句英语句子,能否做如下修改?
原句:The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.
改法:把逗号后面从句改成doubling that of the increase in the previous year.
这样改,有没有问题,若有,是什么问题?