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My father is a benevolent man who often helps others out.He is really a warm-hearted man,always helping others but waiting no returns.
Once he knew that a girl- one of the citizens in Guangzhou got very sick and needed a great amount of money to heal the disease from a TV program,he transferred 20,000 yuan into the patient's account without a second thought,which amounted to about half of his salary per year.Fortunately the patient recovered from the disease a year later.And my father was so excited and happy when he knew the girl has recovered.But since my father sent her money anonymously so that she couldn’t have known who offered help.Finally she wrote a letter and put it on TV to thank all the people who were of great help.
Another example might be that one day my father and I stalked around the street and suddenly saw an old women lying on the ground.After checking we found that the old women might get sick because of the hot weather in summer.He took her arms and carried her on his back to hospital immediately.As expected,her dizziness disappeared after staying in a cooler place and drinking some glucuronidase.Since the old lady didn’t bring much money with her,my father pays most of the cheating fee.About 30 minutes later,her son has reached there.She told him about the kindness and generosity of my father.Her son was very thankful.Therefore,he tried to give my father some money for his help.However,my father refused.He said as he always did,“It’s one’s obligation to help others in need and it’s nothing.”Million thanks~~you really help me out! Looking forward to receiving the rest 2 topics' writings from other e-friends~~ Thanks agian!!