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Practial training is playing a more important role than before in modern educational system.Many people believe that providing students practical training is a good teaching methodology.As to me,it is more important for students to learn theory well in university.
Practical experiences are based on thory.Only through enhancing their theoretical knowledge can students improve their practical skills.University students are at their best age to accept new knowledge.In their twenties,students can grasp what has been taught excellently.In order to become more skilled individuals,they should learn more theoretical knowledge to fulfill themselves.It is generally believed that practice makes perfect.Practice skills can be improved at any time after they graduate and begin to work.,but they will not have enough time to improve theory if they did not remember theoretical knowledge in school.
Putting ideas into practice is more difficult than having them..It would be a hard time for new graduates to start work.If students do enough practice in university,they would get accustomed to work soon and make fewer mistakes than peers,which make them more competitive.
In conclusion,practice experience do plays an important role in working lives,but not in campus.Universities can provide students practical training to some extent,but put more emphasis on theoretical knowledge.

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