帮我看看这个有语病么

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帮我看看这个有语病么
I'm just myself.I'm not the eyes and ears of anybody.I never saw what are you two talking about,so I know nothing,You can trust me

what are you two talking about是宾语从句,要用自然语序:what you two are talking about,
I never saw 如果改成I have never seen,会好点.如果是口语的话,不改也行.