帮我看看这篇文章有没有错
帮我看看这篇文章有没有错
PEN PAL WANTED
Dear Student,
Hey!My name is Susan.I live in Pingdu,China.I'm 14 years old and my birthday is in September.I can speak Chinese and a little English.I have no brother and sister.My favorite sport is basketball.My favorite subject in school is English.It's fun.But I don't like math,it's too difficulty.I like going to the movies with my friends and watching TV.My favorite music is U.And my favorite singer is(这个地方我不知道是用is还是are) SJ.My favorite soap operas are My Girl and Full House.My favorite fruits are apples and bananas.
Can you write to me soon?
Yous
Susan
1 my birthday is in September这句话很典型的中国式英语.虽没有语法错误但不符合外国人说话习惯,可以说i was born in September.
2 I have no brother and sister这里的and应该为or.
3 My favorite subject in school is English我觉得这句话in school 是多余的,和第一条理由一样.
4 difficulty是名词,应用形容词difficult.
5 like going to the movies应该为like going tosee a film或者 like going to watch a movie .
6 And my favorite singer is(这个地方我不知道是用is还是are) SJ用is,因为他们是一个团体
7 Can you write to me soon? 也不是很合适,改为i hope you want to make friends wish me and write to me soon.比较好~
顺便说一句,我也很喜欢浪漫满屋~呵呵~希望回答对你有用~o(∩_∩)o...