帮看一下英语句子很简单的

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帮看一下英语句子很简单的
The writer had read an article about smoking and decided to smoke a last cigarette.
His wife suffered his bad temper and large appetite because of her husband’s giving up smoking for a whole week.
Whenever his friends offered him cigarettes,they always were amused because he produced sweets from his pocket.
However,at a party,he accepted a cigarette from one of his friends.
Now he returned to normal.
帮我看看有没有语法错误,好象没有,但不通顺

The writer had read an article about smoking and decided to smoke a last cigarette.However,at a party,he accepted a cigarette from one of his friends.His wife suffered his bad temper and large appetit...