在线改英语作文,帮忙看看语法啦,什么时态有没用错误

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在线改英语作文,帮忙看看语法啦,什么时态有没用错误
My name is Mary,I was visited going to the local zoo last week.In there i looked manatee there are very strong and intelligent and there has ten feet long and 1000 pounds

be going to 是将来时态,后面不能加last week,可以加tommorrow,next week,另外,一句话不能出现两个动词,比如第二句,was和visit不能同时出现,第二句应该为I went to the local zoo last week,这是一般过去时.there 前...