在线改英语作文,帮忙看看语法啦,什么时态有没用错误My name is Mary,I was visited going to the local zoo last week.In there i looked manatee there are very strong and intelligent and there has ten feet long and 1000 pounds
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在线改英语作文,帮忙看看语法啦,什么时态有没用错误
My name is Mary,I was visited going to the local zoo last week.In there i looked manatee there are very strong and intelligent and there has ten feet long and 1000 pounds
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用了过去式（was，visited）就不能用be going to了，I在哪里都必须大写，而不是用i，即然是10那就应该用have。
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没有错，就是pounds后丢标点了！!!!
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be going to 是将来时态,后面不能加last week,可以加tommorrow,next week,另外,一句话不能出现两个动词,比如第二句,was和visit不能同时出现,第二句应该为I went to the local zoo last week,这是一般过去时.there 前...
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My name is Mary,I visited the local zoo last week.In there i looked manatee there are very strong and intelligent and there has ten feet long and 1000 pounds