He was such a good person I feel very happy and lucky to be a friend of him有错误吗

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He was such a good person I feel very happy and lucky to be a friend of him有错误吗

首先我想说说时态问题,前面用的was,后面用feel有些不太合适,这个句子从语法结构上也存在错误,后面的him应该去掉,因为你这是个定语从句,你省略了引导词who(that),所以这个person在后面的从句中做of的宾语,若加上him,就重复了.