请问这句话有语法上的错误吗?有的话请改正!The self-service travel could satisfy our personal demand,but apart from that ,it doesn’t have more advantages.

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请问这句话有语法上的错误吗?有的话请改正!
The self-service travel could satisfy our personal demand,but apart from that ,it doesn’t have more advantages.

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语法错误是没有的了