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下面英语句子有语法错误吗
By the end of 1999,Westlife had released their first album,which had some excellent songs in it.Such as《Swear it again》,《If I let you go》.Besides the two,another reproduced song 《Seasons in the sun》also moved the whole England.

基本可以,如下要好些:By the end of 1999,the group Westlife had released their first album with some excellent songs in it,such as "Swear it again" and "If I let you go".Besides,another well-known song ...