是关于暑假计划的 语法错误或者是时态错误

问题描述:

是关于暑假计划的 语法错误或者是时态错误
Our summer holiday is coming .We can do many interesting things.Like going hiking ,going swimming and so on.I plan to have a rest .I 'm going to travel with my parents.I hear that Beijing is a good place to sightseeing,so we decided to go there first.In fact,I will go to high school next year .So I have to get ready for the high school study .My mom gave me some good books .I will read them in holiday.However ,If I were free ,I would visit my grandparents or do housework for my parents.I can't wait my summer holiday.Do you have any plan for the summer holiday

Our summer holiday is coming .We can do many interesting things like going hiking ,swimming and so on.I plan to have a good rest .I 'm going to travel with my parents.It is said that Beijing is a good place for sightseeing,so we decide to go there first.In fact,I will go to high school next year .So I have to get ready for the high school study .My mom gives me some good books .I will read them during the holiday.However ,If I were free ,I would visit my grandparents or do housework for my parents.I can't wait my summer holiday.Do you have any plan for the summer holiday