有谁能帮我看下这个英语句子有没有什么毛病,应该怎么改

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有谁能帮我看下这个英语句子有没有什么毛病,应该怎么改
Along with the economic development rapidly,people's standard of living also has a great breakdown.
那个不是breakdown 是breakthrough,刚才忘记改了,我问的是语法方面的错误

Along with the rapid economic development,people's standard of living has also greatly elevated.