有谁帮忙帮我点评一下我写的英语作文啊

有谁帮忙帮我点评一下我写的英语作文啊
As we all know,it is important to have a good mood everyday.Not only a good mood helps us have a optimistic attitude to face with the trouble in life but also have a good effect on the others.With the help of a good mood,we can enjoy our life better.
However,with the development of the society,more and more people always have bad moods.Pressures,neverous and sorrow lead to their bad moods.In order to turn a bad mood into a good one,what should we do
As far as I'm concerned,we are supposed to remember the happy time instead of the bad time.For instance ,the beautiful time with our families or friends.It is suggest that we should call our best friends to have a good talk.Only in this way can we turn a bad mood into a good one.