请帮我批阅一下英语小作文（2）写5－8句左右的句子,关于‘我最喜欢的故事’,要求意思明确,内容连贯Hello My favourite story is .Because it is very interesting.And it can tell us many fables.We can learn a lot of in the book.Do you like it.

Hello ! My favourite story is "The stories of Fables" for it is very interesting,and that it tells us many fables. We can learn a lot in the book.
Do you like it?

Hello ! My favourite story is The stories of Fables . Because it is very interesting. And it can tell us many fables. We can learn a lot of from the book.Do you like it?
The stories of Fables 要斜着写英文中没有书名号。
learn a lot of in the book 中 in 该为 from 较好。
Do you like it. 用问号。

Hello ! My favourite story is ,because it is very interesting. It can tell us many fables. We can learn a lot in the book.
I hope you will like it.
第一：连词不可以乱用.
第二： a lot 是后面不跟名词的, 我们可以从书中学到 “很多”.如果要a lot of 就要加一个名词复数在后面, 例如“things”,它修饰可数和不可数名词.
第三：写作文最后用Do you like it? 有点唐突, 如果说的委婉一点我个人感觉比较好.
总得来说你的作文不错,不过要加油喔, 句式要灵活运用呢, 可以用并列句呀, 不要老用简单句, 学会了复合句以后,写起作文来会更顺手哟.

Hello! My favourite story is “The Story of Fables”.Because it is very interesting, and it can tell us many fables. We can learn a lot of things in this book.
Do you like it?