这段English这样写可以吗
问题描述：
这段English这样写可以吗
In the case,the employee who comes from The Great Britain holds some disagreement on their labor contract; he will be suggested using the negotiation for the settlement of labor dispute.In my opinion,there are seven procedures he can use when he decided to use the negotiation to the settlement of conflicts.
答
第一句：the employee who came(要用过去式) from (没有the) Great Britain.第一句的后半句改成：he will be suggested to use negotiation for the settlement of labor dispute.第二局：.when he decided to use (...