帮我看看有没有语病(英文)
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帮我看看有没有语病(英文)
帮忙看看,有语病帮我修改,这是我明天比赛的开场白
正文:Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone(dear teachers), I'm from class eleven, Grade seven,Jin niu experimental middle school. I am a lively and happy girl.I like english and music quite a lot, Today, I am going to take us a very happy song called JAMABALAYA, I wish that you could like it.
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Good morning/afternoon/evening,everyone(dear teachers),I'm from class eleven,Grade seven,in Jin niu experimental middle school.I am a lively and happy girl.I like English and music quite a lot,Today,I...