英语翻译

问题描述:

英语翻译
Beloved teacher:hello!I have five grade students,although I my classmates in front of you is always grow kids,but you to teach us things unequivocal on weekdays,after your hands,and has left us from the original a white paper into a portrait of small pictures.You always try to learn to become a joy,You let us know how to make an honest child,give play to one's own advantage,and mend your own faults.You always care for our study and life,you're always trust; You let us know,no matter how noisy,outside in your class,we will find a study of silence,and the tolerance and laughter and excitement...When the class I don't listen attentively,you not blame,patiently deceived me,When I quarreling with classmates,you did not scold,guide me should do well between the classmate of unity.When I naughty forgot homework,you have no strict-we criticism,and charged next time,I will finish,When I was learning has been achieved in a little bit of progress,you will not pity to praised me than I was happy,appear...My spring is in your praise,my summer in your smile,my fall in your criticism,my winter in your work.Thank you for my teacher!This salute!
你们可不可以帮我写一篇 介绍自己寒假的英语作文

觉得这段话有些问题.
我的翻译如下:
亲爱的老师:
您好!
我是您五年级的学生,尽管我和我的同学们在您的面前总是长不大的孩子,但是您平日总是一心地教我们东西.经过您的培育,我们从一张白纸变成了一幅幅生动的小图画.您总是让学习变成一种乐趣.您让我们知道如何做一个诚实的孩子,让我们注重发挥自己的优势,弥补自己的不足.您总是关心我们的学习和生活,您总是信任我们.您让我们知道,无论我们在课堂外如何架闹,但在您课堂上,我们总是安静地学习,在您的课堂上有容忍,有欢笑,有激动.当我在课堂上不认真听讲,您并不责怪我,而是耐心地开导我.当我和其他同学吵架,您也不责骂我,而是引导我们同学之间应该像一个团体.当我淘气时忘了做作业成绩,您也不严厉地批评我,而是让我下次补上.当我学习上有一点点小的进步,您一点都不吝惜您的赞扬,好象您比我还要高兴似的.我的春天就是您的表扬,我的夏天就是您的微笑,我的秋天就是您的批评,我的冬天就是您的工作.
谢谢您!我的老师
此致
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