For my third princess,i will work hard and study hard to give her happiness for a lifetime 这句有没有病句?那要怎么说才好看呢?
问题描述:
For my third princess,i will work hard and study hard to give her happiness for a lifetime
这句有没有病句?
那要怎么说才好看呢?
答
应该没有吧
答
没有了,改得很好了
答
study hard 似有重复,work hard 可以表示工作及学习努力
答
貌似没有。。
不过看这别扭些……