For my third princess,i will work hard and study hard to give her happiness for a lifetime 这句有没有病句?那要怎么说才好看呢?

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For my third princess,i will work hard and study hard to give her happiness for a lifetime
这句有没有病句?
那要怎么说才好看呢?

应该没有吧

没有了,改得很好了

study hard 似有重复,work hard 可以表示工作及学习努力

貌似没有。。
不过看这别扭些……