帮忙看一下我的句英语有没有错的地方?For my third princess,i will be work hard and study hard to give her a lifetime happiness!
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帮忙看一下我的句英语有没有错的地方?
For my third princess,i will be work hard and study hard to give her a lifetime happiness!
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be去掉,a lifetime happiness的a去掉
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For my third princess,i will work hard(will be hardworking ) and study hard to give her happiness for a lifetime !(注：lifetime是名词,happiness 不可数）