帮我改一下英语过去式的作文(改错误的单词和语法)(大小写没关系)
帮我改一下英语过去式的作文(改错误的单词和语法)(大小写没关系)
Today I went shopping with my friends .At 13:00 we meet in my house .At13:30 we leave my house.First we went to (cloth store服装店) ,I buy a (T-shirst T恤衫)
,I think it's very cool,my friends think so .After buy cloth ,we went to the big supermaket .I buy many delicious food and junk drink .My friends buy many food too .After that we went to my friend house ,so we ate food .We were very happy.
Today I went shopping with my friends . At 13:00 we met in my house . At13:30 we left my house. First we went to the(cloth store服装店) , I boughta (T-shirt T恤衫)
,I think it was very cool,my friends thought so . After doing that, we went to the big supermarket . I bought lots of delicious food and junk drink .My friends bought much food too .After that we went to my friend's house ,then we ate food . We were very happy.
以上是我帮你改完后的文章,你看一下,你的错误我都改好了,有些副词用错或是名词单复数,我也都帮你改好了.很高兴能帮你,愿你英语成绩更上一层楼.