帮我查查这句话有没有语病My entry sent for the beijing photograpy competition of the young group won the second prize
问题描述：
帮我查查这句话有没有语病
My entry sent for the beijing photograpy competition of the young group won the second prize
答
我认为应该为My entry which was sent for the beijing photograpy competition of the young group won the second prize.（改为一个从句，就好了）
sent 和后面的won 为两个动词，而英语中一个句子只有一个谓语。
答
My entry sent for the beijing photograpy competition of the young group which won the second prize
which后的从句修饰group，这样就是一个完整的句子
答
没问题.sent for在这个句子充当非谓语,前面省略which was.所以这个句子没有语病.