求英语达人救救我,改错题,如下

求英语达人救救我,改错题,如下
1,I shall never forget the day
when I start to learn 2,
swimming.I was going to go on
to a river tour,and Ididn't3,
want to drown if the ship sank!
Swimming had never4,
interested me and i couldn't
understand why all the friends
of my5,thought visit to the local
swimming pool was fun.i was
really6,frighten when i first got
into the water.i climbed in the
shallow 7,end but watched
others jump into the deep end of
the pool.8,i found i could walk
with great difficult across the
pool9,in the shallow end and
slow started moving my arms
and legs.10,It took me a few
month to become a
swimmer.Now i enjoy
swimming.