请求帮忙批改一篇小作文,英语,急用! 谢谢Dear Jenny ,I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.You are a very kind person in my heart , to be honest ,When I arrived in this city ,I felt quiet lonely and afraid. my english wasn’t so good that i couldn’t take bus by myself. I have a lot preparation to do especially before the new term stars .Fortunately I met you . I still remember that you took me to go to the local library and buy some equipments fro

请求帮忙批改一篇小作文,英语,急用! 谢谢
Dear Jenny ,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
You are a very kind person in my heart , to be honest ,When I arrived in this city ,I felt quiet lonely and afraid. my english wasn’t so good that i couldn’t take bus by myself. I have a lot preparation to do especially before the new term stars .Fortunately I met you . I still remember that you took me to go to the local library and buy some equipments from market. When I have difficulties with my English language or have s homesick ,you always stay with me and help me overcome difficulties.
I feel it so lucky to have met you and been a good friend with you .I’d like to invite you come to my house to join a meal with me .and.I hope you will give me the chance to return your kindness.
Yours sincerely
Hayley