请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文（邀请书）.本人英语水平太低Dear Lily I hope to be able to attend our dinner if you come then I would be glad to,because our people here are very welcome to you if you have what thing too not go
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请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文（邀请书）.本人英语水平太低
Dear Lily
I hope to be able to attend our dinner if you come then I would be glad to,because our people here are very welcome to you if you have what thing too not go
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Dear Lily
I hope you can come to our dinner.If you come,I will be very happy. All people here will understand you if you are too busy.
这是我改的，你看一下吧。仅供参考。
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有很大问题，没法改，你想说的是神马意思
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你这没断句吗？