请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(邀请书).本人英语水平太低.Dear LilyI hope to be able to attend our dinner if you come then I would be glad to,because our people here are very welcome to you

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请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(邀请书).本人英语水平太低.
Dear Lily
I hope to be able to attend our dinner if you come then I would be glad to,because our people here are very welcome to you

Dear Lily,
Can you come to my home to have dinner with us at 6:00 this evening? All of us here will quite welcome you !
We are looking forwarding to seeing you!
yours,
你的名字
邀请书要写时间,地点,什么事情哦。

Dear Lily:I hope you will be able to attend our dinner.I would be glad to have you at here,because our people would be really happy if you come to join us.Sincerely,你名字