「英语」请大家帮我看看这句话是否有语病i found a wallet lying in the corner when i were sweeping the floor yesterday

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「英语」请大家帮我看看这句话是否有语病
i found a wallet lying in the corner when i were sweeping the floor yesterday

有语病,句子的开头没大写,中间的“我”要用“me”。

were 改为was
别的没问题.