Still my composition,Who can help me correct the mistake某国际旅游团游览长城.车抵长城,下车前,你作为导游向大家作必要的交代和介绍.下面使讲话内容；1世界上最长的城墙,有2000多年历史,世界文化遗产之一2正值旅游旺季,游客较多,注意安全3旅游车在入口处等待,记住车号和车颜色4贵重物品随身携带,下车前关好车窗5讲话时间为下午1点半,在长城逗留三个半小时,请准时返回6祝大家玩的愉快写作要求1必须用5个句子介绍所给的全部内容2将五个句子组织成连贯的短文Ladies and gentlement,Here we are the foot of the Great Wall,let me tell you something about it,The Great Wall is the most long wall in the world,which has a history of two thousand years,it also is on

某国际旅游团游览长城。车抵长城，下车前，你作为导游向大家作必要的交代和介绍。下面使讲话内容；
1世界上最长的城墙，有2000多年历史，世界文化遗产之一
2正值旅游旺季，游客较多，注意安全
3旅游车在入口处等待，记住车号和车颜色
4贵重物品随身携带，下车前关好车窗
5讲话时间为下午1点半，在长城逗留三个半小时，请准时返回
6祝大家玩的愉快
写作要求
1必须用5个句子介绍所给的全部内容
2将五个句子组织成连贯的短文
Ladies and gentlement,
Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall. let me tell you something about it.
1. The Great Wall is the longest wall in the world, with a history of two thousand years, is one of the cultural heritages of the world.
2. Thousands of tourists come here in peak season ,so we should bear in mind the safety issues .
3. By the way, don’t forget the number and the color of the bus which parks by the entrance.
4. Take your personal belongings with you and make sure the windows are closed.
5. We will stay here for about three hours. Please come back before 4:30 P.M. Last but not the least, Hope everybody has a good time.
数了一下,好象不止五句话唉. 你写得还是蛮通顺的, 基本词汇也用的正确.但要注意标点符号和单词拼写.另外,我把句子换成更象导游交代事情的口气.
Keep up the good job!

Ladies and gentlmen,
Now we are in the foot of the Great Wall,let me tell you something about it.The Great Wall is the longet wall in the world,which has a history of two thousand years and is one of the cultural beritage of the world. There are so many tourists come here in the high tourist season.So we should look to our own safety. Before getting off the car ,we must take the valuable along,keep the car's windows close ,and then we will wait the tourist bus in the entrace .By the way,don;t forget the bus's number and colour.We will spend three hours on the Great Wall.Please come back before 4;30 PM. At last,I hope everybody have a good time.
累啊，真想给你再写一篇啊

Here we are,AT the foot of the Great Wall.Let me tell u something about it.The Great Wall is the longest wall in the world,which has a history of 2000 years.It is also(形前系后) one of the cultral her...

Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall
let me introduce it to you
The Great Wall is the longest wall on the earth
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