英语翻译

问题描述:

英语翻译
Only in this way,can we make the Chinese Dream come true.这样写有没有错误?或者应该怎么写?

去掉逗号就更完美了
Only in this way can we make the Chinese Dream come true.Only with these measures taken can we make the Chinese Dream become glowing reality.这样翻译行吗?童鞋,语言之美,非繁就简的。后面的句子就是把简单复杂化了,个人意见哦。