哪位达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有没有什么错误吗?或者有没有什么更地道的回答能表达我的意思?1.Q：Describe your college life.Is it different from your high school life and why?A：My college is busy but substantial.It has a big diffierence from my high school life.In one hand,when I was in high school,I can devote almost all my time into study.But in college,I should spend lots of time taking part in many kinds of activities.And in the other hand ,I must learn to study on my own in my college life,or
哪位达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有没有什么错误吗?或者有没有什么更地道的回答能表达我的意思?
1.Q：Describe your college life.Is it different from your high school life and why?
A：My college is busy but substantial.It has a big diffierence from my high school life.In one hand,when I was in high school,I can devote almost all my time into study.But in college,I should spend lots of time taking part in many kinds of activities.And in the other hand ,I must learn to study on my own in my college life,or you will be failed in many subjects.
2.Q:Have you encountered any difficulty in your college life?If yes,how did you solve the problem and adjust to college life?If no,what do you think you have got in your college life?
A:Yes,of course.In college ,I should spend much time taking part in many kinds of activities but I also need lots of time study on my own .And the difficulty came out that I don't have enough time to do both of them well.To solve this problem,I drawed a timeable .It can reduce much time which I wasted.In this way,I'madjusting to the college life day by day.
1. In the one hand
devote...to
But改为while比较好表示对比
去掉in the other hand 前的And
最后一句 or you will fail in many subjects.用主动语态
2.I don't have enough time to do both of them well. 换成这个是不是比较好 I don't have enough time to balance both of them well.
有错误，有一些搭配问题，第一句话你是想要表达什么意思呢？没看懂哦。on one hand , devote ...to..., spend time in doing something,介词不能省，on the other hand, by my own.in my college life用in campus 代替吧，避免过多的重复。
第二个问题, 第二个句子没看懂，这样说不知道是你的意思不， when i confront with difficulties, i am not so powerful enough to handle both the difficulties and my study. To solve this problem , i made a schedule, which save much of my time. By doning in this way, i am adapting to my college life graduately.
我按我的理解给你改的，如果不是你的意思，再追问
1.My college life is busy and substantial.It is quite diffierent from that of my high school. On the one hand, when I was in high school, I could devote almost all my time to my study. But in colleg...