麻烦英语好朋友 帮我看看我的文章 改改错 这是一封求职信March 26th,2011Dear Mr.Li:I know that your university have a open position in English teacher from my friend Mr.Zhang.I would be interested in exploring the possibility of ovtaining such a position within your University.I have been a doctor degree of California University of Languages.My major is arts.Especially,I'm good at English,and,I'm interested in teaching english.I want to be a english teacher as i was a child.I can
麻烦英语好朋友 帮我看看我的文章 改改错 这是一封求职信
March 26th,2011
Dear Mr.Li:
I know that your university have a open position in English teacher from my friend Mr.Zhang.I would be interested in exploring the possibility of ovtaining such a position within your University.I have been a doctor degree of California University of Languages.My major is arts.Especially,I'm good at English,and,I'm interested in teaching english.I want to be a english teacher as i was a child.I can teach something in english about oral ,reading,writting,arts.
I look forward to meeting you soon in an interview.Please contect with me at 1234567.I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.
sincerely yours
Maria Stein
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