急求一道英语改错题答案 共十处错误This morning my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very sadly.She said that she had a big fight for her parents."I went to a concert the last night.They did't like it but scolded me when I came back,"she said.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDS and listens his music every day.She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's how
急求一道英语改错题答案 共十处错误
This morning my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very sadly.She said that she had a big fight for her parents."I went to a concert the last night.They did't like it but scolded me when I came back,"she said.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDS and listens his music every day.She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's how they scolded her.I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents.
This morning my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very _sad_.She said that she had a big fight _with_ her parents."I went to a concert _不用加the_ last night.They _didn't_like it _and_ scolded me when I came back,"she said.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDS and listens_加个 to_ his music every day.She goes to all of his _concerts_and cares about anything about _him_. My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's _why _they scolded her.I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her _parents'_.
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This morning my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very (sad).She said that she had a big fight (with) her parents."I went to a concert (去掉the) last night.They didn't like it (and) scolded me when I came back," she said.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDS and listens (加入to) his music every day.She goes to all of his (concerts) and cares about (everything) about (him).My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's (why) they scolded her.I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her (parents').
This morning my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very sadly(sad).She said that she had a big fight for(with) her parents."I went to a concert the(/) last night.They did't(didn't) like it but(and) scolded me when I came back,"she said.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDS and listens (to)his music every day.She goes to all of his concert(s)and cares about anything(everything) about her. My uncle and aunt are worried about her and I guess that's how(why) they scolded her.I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents(parents').